This can be a vintage five-paragraph essay introduction.

This can be a vintage five-paragraph essay introduction.

But Alex’s professor doesn’t want it. She underlines the initial two sentences, and she writes, “This is too general. Get to the point.” She underlines the 3rd and fourth sentences, and she writes, “You’re just restating the question I inquired. What’s your point?” She underlines the sentence that is final after which writes within the margin, “What’s your thesis?” because the final sentence in the paragraph only lists topics. Continue reading “This can be a vintage five-paragraph essay introduction.”